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On Writing Poems

WriteALovePoem-e1390540343441It’s challenging, to say the least.

For me, the literary genre most difficult to produce is the poem. Putting together the elements of meter, rhyme scheme, sound and imagery is not easy. It would take more than creativity to  express thoughts and feelings using the most appropriate figures of speech.

My best poems are written in Filipino. I’ve been trying to write good ones in English but I have to admit that it’s a mighty struggle. I’m not sure if for example the following quatrain makes sense:

Whisper your woes on the flicker
Cover it with dried leaves and twigs
Whisper till the flame grows taller
Let it burn your anguish and grief

I have no problem with free-verse but my dream is to walk gloriously  the “rhymed” and “metered” path while holding the hands of either Erato or Euterpe.

One time I tried to mix Greek mythology and poetry and this is what came out:

“Pain’s But a Myth”

Writing stories is just as difficult because mixing in a bowl  the elements of fiction within the bounds of the plot  is not a walk in the park.  But fiction writers have the luxury of using a lot of pages to serve their purpose. Leo Tolstoy needed more than half a million words for his novel “War and Peace.”

Conversely, a poet has a single page, sometimes not even the whole of it, to capture vivaciously and vividly the emotions and thoughts pervading within or around him. The Japanese, through their Haiku, would do it in a single-stanza poem with three lines consisting of a total of 17 syllables.

What adds difficulty when poets thread the rhyme zone is that they can not walk the path of sadness while wearing a smile. Neither can they frolic in the lake of happiness while riding the canoe of sadness.

Pain begets pain, joy engenders joy. This is seemingly the prevailing mood in the realm of poetry. Rare are the crying clowns who can masterfully inject sadness into the veins of their poems while they are cracking a joke.

The melancholic lyre sounds best when played by a poet who in one way or another licked some emotional wounds sometime ago in a desolate room. On the other hand, the trumpet of merriment can best be blown by a poet who has journeyed the clouds of ecstasy.

But life is a masterful musician who teaches poets to play both the melancholic lyre and the trumpet of merriment. Life enables a poet to play any of the said instruments at any given time.

If a poet intends to paint his canvas with gloom then he can easily prick an old emotional wound until it bleeds sadness. He can walk down memory lane and revive the pains inflicted by either a person or an event he would rather forget. That’s not masochism but rather a form of sacrifice, the poet ought to feel what he intends to write.

Conversely, it is from the same memory lane where the poet could revisit the happiest moments in his life if  it is the lovely colors of joy he wants to be seen in his canvass.

That‘s the beauty of being a poet. Poets can switch with ease to any emotions that they desire. Like an actor in a theater, crying one moment then in a jiffy burst into laughter.

Sometimes poets get misconstrued. When a poem tackles sadness and regret for losing someone the readers would think that the poet still loves and wants that someone back. Worse, the person who felt alluded to may either be excited or feel vindicated.

Lest we forget that poets are men of arts who write for art’s sake. Yes, they draw inspiration from someone or something. They need a motivation in the pursuit of their art. But as it is, the end is the art and the motivation is but the means to achieve that end.

And what is the reward the poet receives for writing a poem? The reward is the poem itself. No reward can be sweeter than a poem that artistically conveys the joys and sorrows of the poet.

As to whether or not the poets  who write a poem of gloom and bewail are sad and regretful, only them know. Who knows it may be Melpomene who visited them in their dreams.

 

Sa Sayawan

danceMay nagbulong sa akin…
Ika’y nasa sayawan
May kasama ka raw
Magkahawak ang inyong kamay.

Ang bilis.
Noong isang linggo lang eh tayo,
Kamay ko ang hawak mo.
Bakit ganoon?

Ayaw ko sana
Na sa sawayan pumunta
Subalit para mo akong hinihila
Parang gusto kitang muling makita.

Nadatnang tugtog doo’y mabilis… magaslaw
Subalit ‘di ako maenggayong sumayaw
At pilit kitang tinatanaw
Sa gitna ng patay-sinding mga ilaw.

Nang biglang nagliwanag ang paligid
Tumigil ang tugtog na mabilis
Pumalit ay mabagal na himig
Himig ng mga pusong umiibig.

Silang lahat nagsiupo
Humihingal…
Hapong-hapo.
Ngunit kayong  dalawa nanatiling nakatayo.

Kayo’y aking pinagmasdan,
Umiindayog kayo ng marahan.
Katawan ninyo’y magkadikit,
Parang kinukurot ang aking dibdib.

Nakahilig ka sa kanyang balikat
Balakang mo nama’y mahigpit niyang hawak.
Hindi mo ako matanaw dahil ikaw ay nakapikit.
Parang nang-aalipusta ang ngiti mong matamis.

At bakit naman ang sumunod pang kanta
Ay ang paborito nating dalawa
Kantang sabay nating inawit
Noon ako pa ang iyong iniibig.

Kanta’y parang ayaw matapos
Halos hininga ko sa panibugho’y malagot.
At nang sa labi siya’y iyong hinagkan,
Masuyong halik mo’y kanyang ginantihan.
Nang marubdob kayong naghalikan
Sayawan ay dagli kong nilisan.

(Mula sa kantang “Dancing on my Own” ni Calum Scott)

The Lonely Boat

boat

“What am I without you?”
The boat says to the sea.
“Bring back the tide,
make me alive.
I beseech thee.”

Bring back the tide
Let me ride your waves
Toss me to and fro
Throw me up high
Then splash me down hard into your waiting arms.

Bring back the tide,
Pull me out of the dock!
I’d rather face the peril
of being whipped
by the mighty waves of your love
Than left alone moored in the lonely sands of memory.

Ingliserang Tsiks ni Mang Teban

lady on the phoneGabi’y lumalim wala pa si mang Teban
Kaya’t si misis kunsumido nanaman
“Tawagan mo nga tatang mo,” ani kay Juan
“Baka nasa kanto’t nakikipag-inuman.”

Tinawagan ni Juan hetong si mang Teban
At nang may sumagot tila nagulantang
Pagkatapos niyon ina’y nilapitan
“O nakausap mo ba ang iyong tatang?”

Inakbayan ni Juan inang inis na inis
“Naku nanay, huwag ka sanang magalit.”
Tawag ko kay tatang ang sumagot ay tsiks
Mukhang sosyal, magaling mag-English.”

“Naku lintek talaga iyang tatang mo
Pag-uwi niyan tiyak babambuhin ko
Hindi nanaman tumupad sa pangako
Na titigil sa pambabae ang loko.”

At nang pumasok sa bahay si mang Teban
Kagyat na misis siya ay binatukan
“Aray…aray… O darling bakit nanaman?”
“Naku Teban, huwag kang magmaang-maangan.”

“Tumawag si Juan… ang sumagot iyong tsiks
Ani Juan tsiks mo daw magaling mag-English
Ano nga Juan ang sabi ng Ingliserang bitch?”
Sagot ni Juan – “The subscriber cannot be reached.”

Ang Pulubi at ang Pulis

beggarSa isang simbahan pulubi’y pumasok
Matapos mag-antanda’y kagyat lumuhod
Mga mata’y ipinikit at yumukod
At taimtim na nanalangin sa Diyos.

“Panginoon ako’y muling lumalapit
Heto’t sa gutom ako’y namimilipit
Sa gutom ako’y hayaang makatawid
Kahit kape lamang po at isang biskwit.”

“Panginoon ako sana’y Inyong bigyan
Beinte pesos lamang aking kaylangan
Sampu sa Skyflakes… sampu sa 3-in-1
At sikmura ko po’y hindi na kakalam.”

Dalangin ng pulubi may nakarinig
Ito’y ang katabi niyang mamang pulis
Tumayo ito’t sa pulubi’y lumapit,
“Heto amang, pambili ng kape’t biskwit.”

Natuwa ang pulubi at nagpasalamat.
Wika ng pulis, “Galing iyan sa Taas.”
At nang ang pulis palayo nang naglakad
Binilang ng pulubi barya sa palad.

Nang makitang na pera’y sampung piso lang
Ang mamang pulubi’y parang nagulantang
Muling nag-antanda’t lumuhod nanaman
Nanalangin sa Diyos sa Kaitaasan.

“Salamat po’t panalangin ko’y dininig
Pero bakit po pinaabot n’yo sa pulis
Humati po kasi ang lespung matinik
Kaya, mabibili ko lang po eh biskwit.”

TINULANG JOKES

INAY

mamaKaylan ko po ba ito dapat sulatin?
Kapag ba Inay hindi mo na puwedeng basahin?

Kaylan ko po ba ito dapat sabihin?
Kung pandinig mo ba INAY naglaho na’t
tinig ko’y ‘di na kayang dinggin?

Bago ang nakatakda’y maganap
… bago ang mga braso mo’y bawian ng lakas
at di na kayang gantihan ang higpit ng aking yakap
Eh isuot mo po INAY ang iyong salamin
Simpleng tula ko sana’y basahin.

INAY iyong damhim
Pagmamahal at pagtanging
Sa bawat taludtod padadaluyin

Maka-ina daw ako!
Aba’y dapat lang.

Kung ang ina ang anak ay ‘di malilimutan
Ang anak  – ina’y ‘di puwedeng talikuran.

Ako’y nakarating sa gustong paroonan
Dahil nilingon ko sinapupunang pinaggalingan
Sinapupunang pinaglagakan
Ng buhay kong sa Panginoon ay hiram.

Noong bata ako’t walang muwang
INAY ‘di mo ako pinabayaan
Mga bisig mo’y nagsilbi kong duyan
Inaruga mo ako’t inalagaan
Dinisiplina’t tinuruan.

Kayo po ang una kong guro
Kay dami ninyo sa aking naituro.
Maraming… maraming salamat po!

Salamat po INAY at naituro mo sa akin –
…na magtiwala sa kakayahang angkin
…na sa Panginoon laging manalangin

Hindi ka perpekto INAY
Subalit mahal kitang tunay.
Bigkis nating Diyos ang pumanday
Mananatili hanggang sa kabilang-buhay.

Sorry Wisely

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Sorry Wisely!
Talo ka nanaman.

Paano ka ba naman mananalo…
eh di ka qualified.

Ano?

Ah college graduate ka kamo!
Eh ano naman… kahit ba may PhD ka pa.
Ang tanong eh – may datung ka ba?

Wala! Wala! Walang… DATUNG
Kaya di ka qualified.

Ano?
Bakit kaylangan ng datung?

Susme!
We’re you born yesterday?
Oh kaninang madaling araw lang.

Ha?
Malinis kamo record mo.
Who cares…?
Nobody… nobody but you.
Dahil ang tanong eh – “Meron ka bang datung?”

Ha? Handa ka kamong maglingkod.

Hindi pala dapat Wisely pangalan mo.
Mas bagay sa iyo ang pangalang engot.

Ang hanap ng botante…
hindi ang handang maglingkod
Ang hanap nila’y – ang handang magbayad.

Pera-pera ang labanan tsong.
Gets mo na?

Ha?
Bakit ganun?
Aba malay ko.
Itanong mo kaya sa lolo mong panot.

Kaya… sorry na lang Wisely.
Better luck next time.

Try mo kaya mag-budots.
Baka makakuha ka next time ng –
mahigit labing-apat na milyong boto.